haha oh brilliant! Loved it, it's very funny! And I totally feel sorry for Soup.

you updated! yess i love this story. the chapter was really good! you should be really happy with yourself, seriously. you didn't have many typos or anything at all and the long chapter was also really nice :) i'm liking this story more and more, so keep it up.

have a good holiday, and if you get bored, KEEP WRITING! update the sooner the better :D

good job again!

ooh Isaac is mad lol...update soon cant wait to read the next chapter!

I'm so glad you updated. I can't wait to read more.,

CHEERS!

~Jeni

i'm having fun! thanks

btw, it's break, not brake :)

Serena and her wicked-awesome ice-cream flinging skills. Love it!

You've been using "brake" everywhere, when you should be using "break." Brake means stop, while break refers to a short time gap.

Aw, Soup is so cute with his flower! Guys who were sweet like that as children always grow up to be adorable. It's nice to see Serena finally opening up to the guys. :-) Sorry my review is so short and devoid of content - college is eating my life and I'm ridiculously tired. Update soon!

I'm so excited that you updated!

I loved the outing she had with the guys. And she threw ice cream in Soup's face. I had tears from laughing so hard. That was just great.

And then Isaac just had to go and try and ruin it. Ah well.

I can't wait to read more. It was awesome!

CHEERS!

~Jeni

update soon!...i liked the parts where shes with Soup and the guys..but its interesting to read about her and Isaac...cant wait to read the next chapter!

Yum ice cream! Umm I think you made a mistake with "prey tell" it should be pray. Unless she's like, thinking of them as prey. Which could be...Good chapter!

Tag is the greatest game ever, do so love it hehehehe, aw Soup is so sweet.

JM

Hello,

Yay! Thank you soo much for updating! I saw the notification in my Inbox and I leapt with JOY! Not literally of course...

Haha, I laughed so muuch in this chapter, what with the part with Serena flicking ice-cream at Soup! Ingenious! This is really enjoyable to read! Keep up the fantastic work!

Update soon,

C

yayy you updated! i really do enjoy this story even if you don't update so often. it's so good! i'm really wondering what's going to happen and develop though, can't wait! good job and please update soon :)

That Alfonso is definitely something else, haha. But I'm so glad that Soup is going to have a chance to hang out with Serena...maybe he'll stop saying stupid things and actually impress her this time.