Reviews for SOS
cutepanda chapter 9 . 10/17/2008
Getting even better~! I tend to have no idea what to say in reviews...I just go -blank-.?


Good job! I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Thank you for uploading!

Like always can't wait to read the next chapter! Can or is the next chapter going to be in Serena's POV, because I really want to see what she thinks of Soup or Aaron! This is weird...I am treating your wonderful characters like real people.

Thank you!

jenjen-0 chapter 9 . 10/15/2008
As long as you keep updating I won't complain!
TaurusGirl7 chapter 9 . 10/13/2008
update soon!
Adis Crow chapter 9 . 10/13/2008
"I gathered all my courage and met her eyes."

I love that sentence; the trepidation is just incredible! The dialogue between Serena and Aaron (when he can manage a few words) is really well executed.

As for updates, I don't care how long they take as long as they happen. I wouldn't give this story up for anything, and I know how difficult it can be to roll out chapters as fast as people want you to. (I'm having a little trouble with one of my own right now... ugh.)

Keep up the amazing writing!

rainbowhead chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
yay you updated. i was missing reading this story so thank you! i can't wait till the next chapter, update when you can please! :) good job, i'm still loving it.
JadeDream chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
Update soon! I cant wait to read the next chapter, i like the interaction between them all
Scarlet MacDuff chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
This is good. I like the guys. They make me laugh because they seem to act like such typical guys. lol write more soon!
Jeni D chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
I'm so glad you were able to update. I totally understand the life getting in the way thing. I can't wait to read what's in store for the next chapter!


sooner or later its over chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
I thought this was such a cute chapter even if it was a filler, and Alfonso is such a smart and funny character but i was kind of surprised he didn't catch on that Soup likes Serena
Kohlomere chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
Yeah filler, but it was fun.

Great work,

Jevanminx chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
Aw he needs help getting her, hehehehe.

Kyrina chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
very interesting story! please update soon!
cutepanda chapter 8 . 10/8/2008
I really like your story!

The plot is really cute.

The thought of something hppening ,like Brianna, is disgusting!

Good job~

Update soon!

Adis Crow chapter 8 . 9/24/2008
Ah! No! Isaac! Don't give in to the dark side!

I've come across relationships with a huge age difference in other stories, but usually either the difference wasn't quite as much as it is here or the two were living in Medieval Europe, so it was accepted. But this...

Please say Isaac doesn't "go for it".

That said, I really enjoyed this chapter! Waiting for the next one,

Adis Crow chapter 7 . 9/24/2008
Looks like the next chapter will be interesting-it'll go off with a bang!, beep. I loved this line:

"Not to mention, I had just confirmed his suspicions of me liking her in possibly one of the girliest fashions alive."

Ha, it's hilarious! And it's also great that we seem to be getting into more depth of character, especially with Soup's friends-I'm starting to like Michael a lot.

Love the chapter!


(P.S. I got dinged by someone for using the word "nice" in my reviews too much. -grimace- So now I'm trying not to. Anyways, on to the next chapter!)
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