Reviews for SOS |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Serena. I think anyone would freak with that much happening at once. Especially her fellow employees... ugh. You really did a good job making them unlikable. I like Drew, though-and all his bad blond boy glory. Osprey |
![]() ![]() ![]() and i wonder why Derrick would have a weird Darth Vader blow up doll in his office. lol, but excellent chapter except i want more Soup romance :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, so the issue with the harassment is finally being sorted, thats good, cant wait for Soup to come back in the next chapter. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great story can't wait to read the rest please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww poor girl...and no Soup to comfort her :P Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh im SOO glad the lesbien lady is going down! looking forward to more soup action :P update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Serena and Soup...but in my book, and in almost everyone's eyes, these guys over 20 being interested in girls 15 years old is not okay. At all. I really hope it doesn't continue. But anyway, I'm glad Serena finally did something about Brianna. She was just doing too much. I mean, she's free to like whomever she wants, but she has no right to push herself onto Serena like that and basically stalk her at the park. And I still can't get over how I've kind of lost respect for Issac's character...I don't know, maybe I'm being judgemental, but it really bothers me when I start to think that this could happen in real life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() even if you say you've been busy, you wrote well because there were barely any mistakes or typos! there was one though lol in the beginning, you wrote bluetooth as two words, so i thought serena's mum actually had a blue tooth! lol a harmless mistake though. other than that there weren't too many more. good job with this chapter, and i cant wait for the next ones to come! i'm just so glad i've found a story that i'm actually keeping up with because i don't find many that i read all of - they usually become pretty boring, but yours isn't. so thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww no soup and friends! and Isaac! lol update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anglea and Iszac just grosses me out completely I'm sorry but please no, um love soup and update asap |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it poor soup |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter Drew Rocks my Socks anyway UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love isszac his so cool great chapter Soup rocks |