Reviews for SOS
Adis Crow chapter 6 . 9/14/2008
Aw, poor Serena. I think anyone would freak with that much happening at once. Especially her fellow employees... ugh. You really did a good job making them unlikable. I like Drew, though-and all his bad blond boy glory.

sooner or later its over chapter 8 . 9/7/2008
and i wonder why Derrick would have a weird Darth Vader blow up doll in his office. lol, but excellent chapter except i want more Soup romance :)
Jevanminx chapter 8 . 9/6/2008
Oh, so the issue with the harassment is finally being sorted, thats good, cant wait for Soup to come back in the next chapter.

tourana chapter 8 . 9/6/2008
hey great story can't wait to read the rest please update soon
jenjen-0 chapter 8 . 9/6/2008
Aww poor girl...and no Soup to comfort her :P Can't wait for the next update!
TaurusGirl7 chapter 8 . 9/6/2008
ohh im SOO glad the lesbien lady is going down!

looking forward to more soup action :P

update soon!
funnechick chapter 8 . 9/5/2008
I love Serena and Soup...but in my book, and in almost everyone's eyes, these guys over 20 being interested in girls 15 years old is not okay. At all. I really hope it doesn't continue. But anyway, I'm glad Serena finally did something about Brianna. She was just doing too much. I mean, she's free to like whomever she wants, but she has no right to push herself onto Serena like that and basically stalk her at the park. And I still can't get over how I've kind of lost respect for Issac's character...I don't know, maybe I'm being judgemental, but it really bothers me when I start to think that this could happen in real life.
rainbowhead chapter 8 . 9/5/2008
even if you say you've been busy, you wrote well because there were barely any mistakes or typos! there was one though lol in the beginning, you wrote bluetooth as two words, so i thought serena's mum actually had a blue tooth! lol a harmless mistake though. other than that there weren't too many more. good job with this chapter, and i cant wait for the next ones to come!

i'm just so glad i've found a story that i'm actually keeping up with because i don't find many that i read all of - they usually become pretty boring, but yours isn't. so thank you!
JadeDream chapter 8 . 9/5/2008
aww no soup and friends!

and Isaac! lol update soon!
Trench Coats Suck chapter 8 . 9/5/2008
Anglea and Iszac just grosses me out completely I'm sorry but please no, um love soup and update asap
Trench Coats Suck chapter 7 . 9/5/2008
loved it poor soup
Trench Coats Suck chapter 6 . 9/5/2008
I loved this chapter Drew Rocks my Socks anyway UPDATE
Trench Coats Suck chapter 5 . 9/5/2008
loved it great chapter
Trench Coats Suck chapter 4 . 9/5/2008
loved it
Trench Coats Suck chapter 3 . 9/5/2008
I love isszac his so cool great chapter Soup rocks
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