Reviews for heartbreak for believers
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
wow. very, very beautiful. i love short, meaningful poetry like this. they really move me.

i love the idea.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Interesting imagery here. It's pretty obvious what your meaning is, but you portrayed it in a very creative way.

The imagery itself was also very effective. "Chewing pebbles" - I can just feel the pain and struggle there.

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fairytale failure chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
I love it, so much depth in four lines. Sometimes wishful thinking gets the better of us, and you've expressed it really well here.
Enigmatic Paramedic chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I really enjoy the brevity of this.

And it's clever.

And a little bittersweet.
dArtagnanI chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I would rank it to the rank of a maxim, very realistic and smart. My respects to you
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
like dreaming dreams that will never come true and cannot come true.

great comparison.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
...sad but i understand where you are coming from. dreaming, dreaming, dreaming and reaching...but find out you were never on the right path to begin with.