|Reviews for two worlds|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
don't apologise for venting. i know the feeling in this poem and think about it every day.
except that i feel horribly guilty for being one of the people that life protects.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
i understand the feeling. sad. but well conveyed. i like the way that you kind of wrote about something that i was thinking about in a reverse viewpoint. charity. but thats a different story. i messed the poem up & threw it out anyways. but this is good. ]