Reviews for in delhi, india |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. My parents lived in South Delhi for a while. I think you could be more specific/detailed in this poem. Like when you talk about the crowded trains - use specific images for that. The poem feels kinda abstract, which would be okay, if it wasn't about such a specific place. But overall it was a nice poem; I liked the part about snapshots distributed like flowers in a wedding, and the blind beggar reaching out to the crowds who are blind too. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it makes me want to go india. more than i already did, that is. lovely. |