|Reviews for The Stare|
| Mary Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Thanks for the review! About this one, do you ever listen to the band Weezer? They have one song, I think it's Burndt Jamb, where the lyrics go: Make me happy/For one moment/Of my lifetime/I'll be there. Your poem and synopsis strongly reminded me of it. If you haven't heard of the song or them, you should probably look into it. I think you'd like them.
| Lurid Black chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Yup, I agree with Lilitha, unique topics to write about also, write on.
| Saleinaenachiya chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
ah! i know exactly how that feels. that slight moment where everything disappears and nothing else exists and then it all comes back, and although it seemed much longer then just a mere second your content! lol i really like this. its really short, to the point.