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![]() ![]() I don't really like this...at all. Did you review yourself 1034 times? |
![]() ![]() Sorry to say this but this story is... Stupid? |
![]() ![]() The fact that your story's length was mostly composed of your replies to reader's reviews was a bit misleading. Yet, still like how you kept things short and simple while still managing to keep up some plausible plot. Too bad it seems unfinished. But congratulations on your acceptance to Stanford! :) |
![]() ![]() The shortness really sucks, the story had a good plot but you completely ruined it with the storytelling, length and characterization |
![]() ![]() ![]() I, personally, don't like this style of writing with the short chapters and such. I think I'll have to check out your other story. Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() M is nice. This story seems like it'll be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will not write a review telling you it was short. |
![]() ![]() I think you made the perfect guy too perfect. Your summary doesnt really fit this story anymore, unless it starts going a different direction. |
![]() ![]() hurry update |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah thats a pretty cool list. I wish a guy with all those traits will come my way *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! i think its so cute. you portray quite a lot in your chapters. each chapter telling us something new. i really like both nico and hunter, but currently i feel really bad for nico since she's ignoring him, and the update is so slow...can't wait for the next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, our favorite little person got herself an admirer! So cute. I always, always love your last sentences. They seem to define the ending of the chapter very well in a contemplative twist-y sort of way. Of course, I am a wee bit disappointed that it's only six sentences. But of course, I still find this style refreshing as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HE'S FRIGGIN' ITALLIAAANNNN I think I'm in love with Fabio. No kidding. I think I'm in love with M. But I have a feeling those two are going to end up together...? Anyway, I loved this chapter - the fact that M just said "he's friggin' Italian of course he's the one!" made me laugh. It was a very sweet chapter, felt a little filler-y, a little foreshadow-y but, I mean, he's friggin' Italian! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, Fabio Bianchetti. I sense a hot Italian But regardless, I liked this chapter and how the main character turns him down because of a very small thing. How she's so intent on getting the perfect guy is so sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking M already, haha! I guess I'm liking your style. The fact that there are no quotation marks and everything seems to be almost like an observation on everything and the very simple chapter. It gets straight to the point and it's refreshing. Very, very refreshing! |