|Reviews for the list|
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/4/2014
The fact that your story's length was mostly composed of your replies to reader's reviews was a bit misleading. Yet, still like how you kept things short and simple while still managing to keep up some plausible plot. Too bad it seems unfinished. But congratulations on your acceptance to Stanford! :)
| SallieBear chapter 6 . 2/21/2014
The shortness really sucks, the story had a good plot but you completely ruined it with the storytelling, length and characterization
| Juliet Scar chapter 25 . 12/1/2013
I, personally, don't like this style of writing with the short chapters and such. I think I'll have to check out your other story. Good luck!
| Juliet Scar chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
M is nice. This story seems like it'll be interesting.
| Juliet Scar chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
I will not write a review telling you it was short.
| Karira chapter 40 . 10/27/2013
I think you made the perfect guy too perfect. Your summary doesnt really fit this story anymore, unless it starts going a different direction.
| you idiot chapter 40 . 10/12/2013
| Zero Skye chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
woah thats a pretty cool list. I wish a guy with all those traits will come my way *sigh*
| Reader Girl789 chapter 40 . 8/4/2012
wow! i think its so cute. you portray quite a lot in your chapters. each chapter telling us something new. i really like both nico and hunter, but currently i feel really bad for nico since she's ignoring him, and the update is so slow...can't wait for the next update :)
| Posthumous Phantom chapter 6 . 7/21/2012
Aww, our favorite little person got herself an admirer! So cute.
I always, always love your last sentences. They seem to define the ending of the chapter very well in a contemplative twist-y sort of way. Of course, I am a wee bit disappointed that it's only six sentences. But of course, I still find this style refreshing as always!
| Posthumous Phantom chapter 5 . 7/21/2012
HE'S FRIGGIN' ITALLIAAANNNN
I think I'm in love with Fabio. No kidding.
I think I'm in love with M.
But I have a feeling those two are going to end up together...?
Anyway, I loved this chapter - the fact that M just said "he's friggin' Italian of course he's the one!" made me laugh. It was a very sweet chapter, felt a little filler-y, a little foreshadow-y but, I mean, he's friggin' Italian!
| Posthumous Phantom chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
Ooh, Fabio Bianchetti. I sense a hot Italian
But regardless, I liked this chapter and how the main character turns him down because of a very small thing. How she's so intent on getting the perfect guy is so sweet.
| Posthumous Phantom chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
I'm liking M already, haha!
I guess I'm liking your style. The fact that there are no quotation marks and everything seems to be almost like an observation on everything and the very simple chapter. It gets straight to the point and it's refreshing. Very, very refreshing!
| Posthumous Phantom chapter 2 . 7/21/2012
Hmm, I see a very simplistic mood and tone with this story. I'm not too sure if I like it yet, but we'll see with the next few chapters, right?
| Posthumous Phantom chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I loved this list and just how the little things made me smile. I can relate to most, if not all, the choices. And the last one, "He loves me.", just gave me a nice warm feeling. A really nice start for the first chapter!