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   Simply Me7 chapter 37 . 10/23/2008 Hey good stor! it takes awhile to get used to since all your chapters could be fit into one of most peoples... but still good! Hmm... i dont know what should happen next... come up with somting good..l. |
| cutepanda chapter 37 . 10/18/2008 Very cute story! I am amazed at how you can make your chapters so short but it is still really good to read! The way you write is really good. I have no idea what the girl's name is! I think I may have forgotten it! In the begininning it was funny and I thought that she was stubbon! Please make Nico a better guy! I like Hunter and the girl but I also like Nico! Love Fabio's name! So cool! Please update! GREAT JOB! C |
| welcome to meganland chapter 37 . 10/8/2008 This is good, rally good actually. But i think i just finished it in under 5 minutes. I mean over 30 chapters in five minutes? Come on. Im not complaining, though. I think it give the story character. Two sentanced chapters and kind of your thing. So roll with it xD Update soon, i wanna see what happens. I love Hunter :] |
| JulyPie chapter 37 . 10/5/2008 Ok, I speak no Spanish so I gained nothing form that chapter :S |
| JulyPie chapter 34 . 10/5/2008 Hunter is starting to annoy me, have some flaws! Although regarding Nico, a bit too rage filled for my liking and what a waste of eggs! |
| JulyPie chapter 26 . 10/5/2008 I heart Twilight by the way, and there can be no other Edward Cullen than Edward Cullen. Although personally I prefer Garrett the nomad, who isn't in it till the last book. Anyway, sorry. I still like the story, I will put the Twilight dislike behind me. |
| JulyPie chapter 20 . 10/5/2008 Nico! I want to hug him! |
| JulyPie chapter 18 . 10/5/2008 Poor Brendan. But you were really selling Hunter. Not my ideal but the way you describe him. |
| JulyPie chapter 15 . 10/5/2008 I love Ajmes and the Giant Peach! it is awesome. Sorry, just thought you should know that. :) Also, I am really liking this, I was kind of discouraged by the tiny chapters but they work really well. |
| JulyPie chapter 14 . 10/5/2008 Aww, Nico. I heart Nico! SO he doesn't smell like the beach, few people do! to my knowledge, I don't make a habit of sniffing people. |
| JulyPie chapter 11 . 10/5/2008 lol, M is very suppotive I think, helping her on her quest so thoroughly. |
| JulyPie chapter 8 . 10/5/2008 Aww, stickers! I think I love him too! |
| JulyPie chapter 7 . 10/5/2008 I am liking it so far. The style is good, all very cold and technical cause she is very focused on her goal. The list is very good by the way, although not all of them would be my choice, I would like my man to wear socks. but I am thinking of stealing some of them for my own personal quest, e.g. crinkly eyes, never occured to me how cute that is. |
| Claudia Cobain chapter 37 . 9/9/2008 I know spanish too D Nico es el mejor _ |
| DareToTruce chapter 37 . 9/7/2008 Oh...You should have her find someone even better than Hunter and have a sort of rivalry go on between him and Hunter... That would be fun. Oh! And then, she gets all confused and doesn't know what to do and she starts getting depressed and making bad choices and starts hating everything. Hunter is almost disgusted by the way she is acting and tries to help her. Hunter tells her he will always be there for her. And the other guy is trying to be their for her too, but its just not the same as Hunter. Lol I dont know...That's just an idea of mine... I think you should put more edge to the story. More drama! Anyways, I really like this story so update soon! Does the main girl have a name? Lol if she does, I totally missed it... ~Alena |