Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while.

I love this story; sad that you've got writer's block. It's so annoying, isn't it?

Well, hopefully I'll be back reading a new chapter again soon. )

Keep writing as fabulously as you are now.

okay, obviously youve got the readers on your side; they must love your story to get over 500 reviews. i would love to add you to my c2 community for 500 reviews, but saddly, its for completed works only. if you would like your story to be in my community in the future, please message me when youve finished it as i dont have time to go through all the different stories that i would like to add and check and see if theyre finished. if you would like you can check out my profile and community homepage!

Anna Mae :D

I really like this story. I got used to the style of writing after a while-in a way it's like poetry. And when are you going to update it? :)

Yay! I come back from vacation and there are two new chappies and a story waiting for me! My only regret is that I therefore did not review your last chapter. I liked it. And this chapter was really sweet. I don't know spanish...but I really like guys who do! :) Unless you are willing to translate what that means for those of us incapable of doing so ourselves, I think I'll ask my hot guy friend to do so for me. That could be interesting. I vote for that option. :)

Anyway, about your writer's block, if I think of anything I will get back to you, but right now all I can think of is get rid of Hunter and grab Nico while he's still willing! of course, you might already have the outcome of the story set up and you're only looking for a way to lead up to it. In that case, it will be hard for us readers to lend suggestions unless you want to tell us how you want it to end up. Or maybe you don't know what you want yet, which is where my pro-nico idea comes in. ButI don't know how you should get there...sorry.

Please do try to continue.

Maybe you can do a scene where hunter preforms.. or Nico crying and begging for the girl to like him. [you know... I forget the girls name.. XD]

Something like that. And that bird flying.

I LOVE THIS STORY!

And actually, I can see this getting published too.

No lie.

This is amazing.

To me anyway. :)

I am REALLY liking this story right now.

*keeps reading*

I like that list. :)

Very creative.

Now, to read the rest of the story...

I'm loving this story so far! but alas, I do not know spanish T.T So I was kind of confused in the last chapter, hehe I can infer that is was something sweet and romantic though...

I've read all 37 chapters and I have to say that I love how consistent you are with your characters' personalities. Hunter does seem like he's hiding something-he's just too darn perfect. LIke many other reviewers stated before though, your main character doesn't seem to be showing any signs of being unhappy. It just seems like there's this never-ending flow of happiness in her but wouldn't she start to realize after a month of dating Hunter that he's TOO right for her? Wouldn't our slight OC-girl (OCobsessive compulsive) start to doubt Hunter perfections, I mean, he does fit her criteria PERFECTLY.

Just something to think about . . .

Also I feel like I'm starting to get sucked into your infectious simple writing style, it's so clear and concise. Yet your style paints these beautifully detailed images that are so clear. You've got a talent right there so don't waste it. Anyway I'm tacking this onto my list because I believe that this story has major potential-I mean you've got me hooked-I'm ready to jump unto the Hunter Campaign.

So congrats you've got me totally inspired now! Keep it up whenever you can because this story idea is pretty darn original and catchy.

- P.E.

i think its weird how you beg for reviews and what-not but you aren't really serious about this story. hypocritical much..?

anyway.. its a good story.. i like the way the character is.. and how the words you use are very precise and describe the character just enough to hook the readers and make them want to know more.

however... its getting a bit boring toward the end.. and you still haven't assessed how she's unhappy.. if you choose to continue the story, you should start making her seem unhappy... just little by little...

good luck.

ah! so glad i got caught up on this one. the recent chapters are really good. i'll try to brainstorm for you if you're stuck :)

i sent you an email saying i'm back, did you get it? write back plz

-ty

This story is absolutely amazing; the simplicity of your writing gives it such an innocent, elegant feel.

I like how through the writing style, even though you don't use very much description at all, you get a fantastic image of the characters.

I'm not sure if I'm meant to like Hunter or not, but his name seems to betray his appearance and traits, as if he's not really what he seems, as if he's too good to be true.

I like Nico better, just because he seems so much more real.

And I'm greatly amused by Fabio, I keep on imagining him as the model Fabio and wondering why anyone would find him attractive

I don't know any Spanish lol.

OK, so the summary says she finds the perfect guy. I take it his name is Hunter. But she's not happy. Why? So far, she seems pretty happy to me.

A twist would be fun.

I hope the story works out! Keep thinking! I find day dreaming quite a great technique to further stories. :D

shad

Wow... you've been gone for a while!

Well, I think that Nico really needs to try harder to earn our nameless heroine's love. We must find out what his deal is.

And I actually don't like Hunter that much. He kind of makes me mad... he's too perfect. Maybe she could start to get annoyed with that?

I don't know. Just some ideas for ya... since you asked.

I still love this though!