I am FINALLY done reading all the chapters. I have to say that this is pretty good so far. I can't really complain about the updates, since I haven't been reading since the beginning, but as long as it's quality over quantity, it doesn't seem to be a problem. Frequency is also something you should have. But I really have enjoyed this so far. Keep it up. :D

As for writer's block, just let it come to you.

Eherm, Edward Cullen is made for loving and thus because of his 'stellar' vampire-ness, which comes with super awesome strength, when he slaps Hunter he'll break his neck. THE END.

But anyway, Hunter is awesome.

I'll end up warming up to Nico either way.

I almost feel sorry for him.

To my main point, what the fuck is up with you and writing such short chapters? In almost every way possible this reminds me of The Perks of Being a Wallflower.

Not to be rude, I do like this story or I wouldn't have read it, but...You have made no description of M or whatever the main character's name is.

And that's a cool way to write and such, but it does get old.

I just hope you write longer chapters and get out of your ‘has-no-idea-what-happens-next’ funk.

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Maybe you should make Nico appear again?

It’ll be a great contradictory against the whole I’m-not-stopping-until-I-get-that-perfect-guy thing.

Because I believe, you don’t choose who you fall in love with, it just happens.

But I’m sure your decision will be great no matter what.

So keep writing!

xo.

Nice chapter, though I'm not sure what was said.

I may have gotten an A in my spanish class, but it was only spanish one. So it be nice to have a translation.

I'm not exactly sure where you could go from here, but I'm sure you'll figure something out.

Can't wait to see what you come up with!

DodbC

well someone is a little obsesive. 37 text messages over two days is just a bit much.

anyway, nice chapter.

Well, since she's obviously (at least, obviously *to me*) going to end up with Nico, she needs to start talking to him again. It would be incredibley Nico if he turned up at her front door and confronted her about what's going on. From there, have her forgive him immediately, or have her take her time, but either way, she has to forgive him. Not without an explanation, of course. And she needs to begin to be unhappy with Hunter. It's in your summary, and since it hasn't started happening yet and you've got nothing for your story right now, it looks like a nice place to start.

Hope that helps you some. I'm trying to think of something relatively realistic, and this is as good as it gets from me, for you, haha. But I really think, of anything, something with Nico needs to happen (and not JUST because I lolve him to death).

Olivine.

First of all, what the hell did they say. I take french. xD

Second of all, a few ideas:

1. Hunter's gay.

2. Hunter cheats. But not with M, because that's just way too cliche.

3. Our heroine, who i'm gonna call H to make it easier, realizes that Hunter is too perfect. That she's starting to feel bad about herself, or realize there's nothing she brings to the relationship. Starts to doubt herself.

4. Nico's relationship with his mother is alluded to or explained, leaving H with a new way of looking at Nico. Leads to confusion of her feelings with Hunter, etc, etc, etc.

Hope those help. I'm always open for a PM or beta.

Yay for updates though :)

xoxo,

Sarah

This should have been chapter 37. Cos...37 messages. xD

Sad.

Thanks for the update! I don't really understand what they're saying though, but I'm guessing it's something sweet. Hm...here's an idea. You can have Nico try to talk to her face to face. And go from there. Or have another of those moments where she finds out something different about Nico's personality. i don't know. I hope this helps. Update soon! :)

Aw...poor Nico. 37 texts and not even one reply? C'mon, give the guy a break. Lol. Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward for the next one! :)

Mhm, yeah, I take French. (;

The only Spanish that I know is the one year I took a couple of years ago ... And the Hispanics that invaded the French class. I love my friends. lol.

So, I understood this chapter ... minimally.

lol.

Their relationship is a little too perfect, though.

There has to be some change for your story to advance.

(:

Hunter's perfection needs to end. She needs to find him smoking pot or something so she can second guess their relationship, and Nico needs to do something sweet so he can stay in her mind

I want her to chose Nico!

I didn't even know there was a 36th chapter! I'm such an idiot lol. Ooh, Nico's got it bad :)

he's perfect :). I'd kill for love word in Spanish! Thanks for updating I've been waiting rather impatiently lol. I still love your writing, that much is true. No need to thank me for the compliments, it's onlt the truth :)

I LOVE YOU TOO. :] You wrote this story so of course- haha.

I DON'T SPEAK SPANISH. *cries in a dark corner*. I'm the dork who always learnt French - yes, it's cos I'm British.

Nico sent all those texts - that's kinda sweet. If a little on the stalker side. xD

Haha - well at least it was amazing. France was ok if a little WAY TOO HOT.

I'd help with the writers block but I suppose I'll have to think about an idea. I'll have a go though - pokiesmokies?