Eh, this chapter wasn't your best. I liked it, but it lacked...something. Maybe it's just cause I like Nico :) haha. Hope you get over your block soon!

Faith

i have no idea what they just said.

deadend?

i hate when that happens. :(

how about...nico does something really sweet for her? like, send her flowers or write her a short poem? which makes her realize that he's not that bad and that hunter is TOO perfect skip to hr and nico getting married, buying a house in hawaii, having twins and buying a dog.

...ignore that paragraph except for the first two sentences.

kthx. XD

aw, nico.

i wanna give him a hug. :(

This is certainly something amazing! I've never seen anything like it, and let me tell you, I love it! I love it, I love it, I love it! Fabio makes me laugh, Hunter makes me cry, 'cause he's so darn cute, and the MC (btw, I love how you didn't give her a name), is so original.

lol, it makes me laugh how just last week I wrote a list similar to your MC's. It wasn't as long, though, haha. T'was only 8 points long :P

Sarah :) x

sheesh, she is a fiesty one...but who can blame her. It's hard to find the right guy, some just aren't gonna cut it.

Aw, bummer...allergic to flour. She must miss out on a lot. Oh, and I love this story...a ton.

I think I'm going to make-up an imaginary friend again like when I was five, just so I can name him Fabio Bianchetti. :) Because that name is pretty rad.

Hahah, that teacher must be quite bitter-hearted, and that girl is pretty awesome, having the guts to ask for a transfer form and all. :]

You last updated almost a month ago. I'm not too sure I quite agree with that. (That means you have to update soon.)

I think I like Nico more. I don't agree with the way he treated his mother, but there's got to be some kind of explanation for it. He's just too... right. He has his faults *coughunlikeHuntercough* and everybody needs them. Or else you're just as 2-dimensional as Edward, am I right?

-Olivine.

She's going to end up with Nico.

Following this Twilight thing, Nico IS Jacob Black, because he's much more realistic than Eddie! I, too, read the book 2ish years ago when nobody knew what it was. Now, I walk into Denny's and I can hear people talking about it. No joke! I once heard a girl going over the book bit by bit, boring her poor father to death. I don't get it. I mean, I'm not going to deny liking the book, but there are better ones. Jane Austen, anybody...?

Anyways. Yeah. I am Team Jacob in Twilight, and in The List, I'm Team Nico. It doesn't matter that he's not a gentleman, he saved that bird. I wonder if he would have "saved" the new kid like Hunter did...

Anyways, I'm really enjoying your story. I like this style. I've seen it done a few times before (well, attempted) but you can really pull it off.

-Olivine.

Signing while playing a guitar is cool. But Nico is still better.

:( poor nico, he's not so bad is he?

Wow, that was a long list.

On to the next chapter!

i really liked this chapter. a little different than the other ones but by this point, where i've fallen in love with this whole story, i just wanna read more and more about them

GAH. I'm sorry for not reviewing! I didn't get any FP emails for a long time, and missed tons of updates on all my favorite stories. -bummed-

Anyway, this was a very cute chapter. As much as Hunter's perfectness sometimes bugs me, I totally adored him this time. But that's probably because I'm drawn to musicians...and i totally dig fondue. (the last time i was at a fondue place, a guy behind me goes, "FON-DOO-DOO" to his table mates. i died laughing. just say it out loud, and you'll realize why xD)

So I feel bad for Nico, and shame on our heroine for judging the situation without knowing it.

P.S. Every time i read Fabio's name, I keep seeing Faboo. I don't know if i'm developing dyslexia or what, but it definitely added to my enjoyment of these previous chapters. xD

xoxo!