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Maybreakmyheart chapter 4 . 6/22/2008 Wowie, reconsider I like how she is even if thats stubborn because there are people like that, so I'd love to see where a stubborn determined person like her goes with this...Love it :D |
Maybreakmyheart chapter 3 . 6/22/2008 lol I like how her friend is named M, god your style is like...Epic... Heheehe I love writing..so I pay too much attention to style and approaches to writing, length of chapters, tone in scenes, I think you get the picture I'm a loony ..who reviews so you love me anyway! :D |
Maybreakmyheart chapter 2 . 6/22/2008 I like having short and long chapters varying, I think it's brave and adds to the style, because life isn't always about long complex scenes, sometimes things are simple and sweet. I loved this chapter. :D |
Maybreakmyheart chapter 1 . 6/22/2008 wowie~! That list was good and funny, lol I wonder if there is a guy like that, anyways good job so far I'm looking froward to reading the story! ;) I like the Hunter Bridell campaign, I'll put something on my profile after I read a couple more chapters if I like him but Edward is pretty awesome... :D |
Blind Scribe chapter 32 . 6/20/2008 way to break all the rules. kewl story. |
Randy chapter 32 . 6/18/2008 man your killin us here! (or at least me) this story is amazing and yet you give us short chapters! I AM BLEEDINGLY WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT! |
forkbell chapter 32 . 6/15/2008 no more? [ i just read the whole thing today and i want more! lol. it's really very good and addictive. |
forkbell chapter 30 . 6/15/2008 i think this one is really sweet. is she gonna end up with nico? |
forkbell chapter 18 . 6/15/2008 i'm glad for the girl but i felt bad for brenden . wasn't she too mean to him? |
forkbell chapter 15 . 6/15/2008 this chapter is really funny. i have an alex kramer in my school |
forkbell chapter 11 . 6/15/2008 i was just wondering how old the main girl is? it just said she is in high school |
forkbell chapter 4 . 6/15/2008 i like your story/list thing. it's very creative and i think it's interesting to read |
Noir Hesperus chapter 32 . 6/14/2008 Oh god... -deathgripcling- I'm so sorry. -huggles- I am hopeless and I ought to die. I completely forgot about the existence of fictionpress. -falls to my knees- Please forgive me? ... *ahem* I just speed-read through all the chapters I missed. (my reading skills are THAT good. -ego-) I particularly like the sun set scene. Nico is reminding me more and more of Sevvie. I like Sevvie. Then again, I have always preferred the dark ones. Again... -falls to my knees again- I'm sorry! -Noir |
NotABanana chapter 32 . 6/14/2008 (gasp) I was thinking that I really liked Nico! Yeesh. I love story turns like that, but I was hoping that Nico was actually going to be the perfect one. (sigh) Yes. I was gaping at that update. |
InfernoVia chapter 1 . 6/14/2008 List of the good and the bad. a) First, the story itself is cliche yet you write it in an unorthodox minimalist style (which I like). b) Second, the list is insane, in the sense that it is impossible for a human to have those characteristic. c) Yet, you enjoy playing on that a bit. d) However, the person you create actually has very little personality or anything of interest, he is bland, generic. The character himself does not have the eccentricity of the list. e) Its not original, but it shows you have creativity. :) Have fun. |