Thanks for the fast update! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon! :)

Aww. :) I love your writing style. Very short chapters, yet they're so powerful and adorable. I especially like the short sentences and the way you don't use direct dialogue. Wonderful. And I like Nico and his imperfectness. And the fact that he cares more about a fallen bird than being a gentleman. :) Hunter is too... bah. P I mean, he's still okay, but yeah. You know. :)

Update as soon as you can! :)

Cheers!

- J.

Aw, Corazon.

You updated really quickly! Can't wait for more~

shad

When we studied short stories in English, we were always told that attention to detail had various deeper meanings. One short story I read was the deteriorating relationship between a Father and Son, the Son's descriptions of his father and what he did showed that he did really love the father...why do i get the feeling describing Nico has a deeper meaning?

Amazing chapter as always :)

Thanks for the personal reply back!

He lives down the hill from me this boy...idiot!

Ad I successfully studied an hour today ;)

write more :D

I don't know what it is about Nico...I think he has rustic charm. He's obviously not faking anything, being just the way he is. It's like the whole "he doesn't know how to be cheesy" bit. That's not always a good thing, but I have had suspicions of Hunter's genuiness (i know that's not a word...) It's like Nico doesn't like her, and yet also really likes her. I like the whole bird learning to fly thing...that's cute.

I loved the pretzels chapter and Corazon! Corazon is such a fun word to say. Cor-a-zon. Belnova has a song called Corazon and now I know what it means. Thanks for the lesson.

I like Nico even though he isn't a gentleman. He seemed more concerned for the bird, that had a chance of dying, then the girl. Because baby birds could die if their mothers aren't nearby. And when nests fall from trees, the baby birds could die from the impact or predators like cats, and curious children. I liked the updates!

Thank you for my win-win situation!

No, Nico isn't a gentleman at all. But somehow, he's more real and seems more approachable. Just as a human being. (: He puts the birdie first. And I love how she's the first person she goes to. (: is a sweet name, by the way. I dearly love it.

Aw, I haven't seen Enchanted, either! My friend just rented it the other day and she really, really liked it. I'm a disgrace to movie watchers. haha. I love Amy Adams, though.

Yeah, I definitely plan to. I just need some inspiration. A twist or a change from the original. (:

Ugh, agreed! Sucking blood, in general, is disgusting.

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that's really sweet

wow this one was longer i liked it a lot lol

aw. :]

that was pretty cute.

Aw, Nico might not be much of a gentleman but he is really sweet. I'm really glad he came back, though she seems a little annoyed that he keeps dragging her into things. That poor bird, I can't imagine how scary it must be to plummet out of a tree and have only humans come to your rescue. Aw, Nico is just so cute! If he were real I would definitely coo at him and then put him in a cage along with that guy earlier in the story who was admiring himself in the mirror of his car. I bet they would be completely amusing to watch as they fought for space. Ahh, hehe anyways, good chapter.

aw

that's so adorable!

Nico is sincirely not a gentleman. But we love him anyway... and Corazon... the lovely little birdie, shall spread his wings and fly away. (Snort). Err. No. Not happening, thank you very much. But, once again, you've mad my sucky day better. (TWICE OVER)! If I could, I would hug you right now. Thanks.

-ET

...are you sure Hunter didn't lie about being the secret admirer?

Damn it, girl! Now you've given me a reason to love Hunter (cue the swoon). Must. Find. Flaws. ;~;

I know. I'm always really bad at last names-first names come to me as I write the character, but I always change last names at least 5 times before I'm actually happy with it. Sometimes I don't even bother. :P

ROB LOWE PLAYED SODAPOP CURTIS. In the movie version of The Outsiders. xDD

Lancelot it is! I just chose King Arthur cos apparently he was a redhead or something.

P.S. Osterman? Oh, god. My seventh grade fat-ass teacher was called Ms. Osterman. Everybody called her Oster-cow behind her back. xDD; Oh well. I'm sure Nico wears it with pride (and with hotness)!

xoxo