Reviews for 光線
PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
By あかdo you mean赤or垢? I can see either one being expressed in this poem (if that was your intent I applaud you). Also, I don't really get what you mean by はしうらandつなねん. But overall, very well written poem.
lymli chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
makes me think about a sad setting since war is a sad thing, heartfelt poem.
Rose Valentine chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
The harsh reality of war is such a common word that we hear everyday in our history, yet when you look at our history, it basically consists of wars. This symbolizes our cruelty and inhumane-ness to each other. Yes, it is pointless, bloody and truly a tragedy.