Reviews for the drift v
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
A beautiful play of words. I especially loved the word 'inescapably'. Too good a description for a forest and the poem itself is a great analogy of life.
Ryan Schiff chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Yggy! What are you doing!

whats that word in the second line? Chthonic? Umm...

Even with the random word there I like the feel of this poem. I'm not sure how I feel about "caramelize inescapably"... I like the image but I think they're just to chunky, if you get what I'm saying.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
nice words
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Karamelisiert (oder wie auch immer auf deutsch) ist gut. Man erwartet versteinert und findet die Wende positiv.

Ich war bisher davon ausgegangen, dass du noch jung bist?