I'm not sure if this story is discontinued or not, since you haven't updated in a while, but I thought I'd let you know about the slight error in your summary. There isn't a single California State University. The CSU system, as a whole, has various campuses across the entire state, but none of them are called THE Cal State. They're usually referred to by city-Cal State LA, for example, or SF. I'm not sure if there is one in Long Beach, but if there is, it would be called the Cal State University of Long Beach (probably CSULB for short).

Just cluing you in. :)

Haha I love how cute and humble sam is...

its a big change from the cocksure attitude of guys in other stories!

and this warner dude... well im not too sure what to make of that yet o.O

update soon!

Interesting. Why even bother with Warner when Sam's the obvious boy toy?

Great job,

E.

hey! i found the chapter interesting...i expect that there would be more awkward situations coming? heh...oh an Warner seems like an interesting guy. update soon!

i'll be glad if you could drop by and see my story and give some review! thanks!

ooh very interesting

i love it so far

livvy and sam seem like two very interesting characters

can't wait for more

izzie

I'm loving the story so far, just want to read more! I love how she ends up getting the job with Warner, interested in seeing how that develops.

JJ March

hey! nice chapter...i like it where the story's going. now for suggestions..well, it seems that Sam is already planning to break up with his gf, that wouldn't have been much shocking if they had just started dating but if they have been dating for like 8 months. it should upset him more and he should want to work things out with her. that's what i think.

update soon!

Hey I think this plotline is really unique and interesting... you're descriptive and consistant in your writing too! The only thing I would suggest paying more attention to is that the story seems like its meant to be written in third person, but there are a few areas where you started writing in first person.

Anywho, I'm loving it so far... hope to hear more soon!

- Taurusgirl7

I like the chapter, but everythings underlined. I figure it's just a formatting mistake, but it's distracting. You may want to change that.

cool plot- few mistakes, like sam says they're going to be in the same house for two weeks- thought it was four? but other than that its a good story :D

ver nice story so far. Cant waite for the rest.