|Reviews for time|
| Enigmatic Paramedic chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
This is lovely, girl.
And a really clever idea, on top of that.
[Oh, and I like the new name, too.]
| me. moi. ich chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
i like it, and as true as it might be, dont ever give up on a dream- dreams are what help to make life beautiful
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
"rundown by cars
and sneakers and bad days"
oh, aren't we all, all of our dreams. and dreams are just dreams and reality is over-rated.
sadly truthful lovely poem.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Stunning format and great thought are in this poem. It's brilliant.