aww i really love this story and i know you haven;t updated for about two years, but it's really amazing! anyway even if you don't continue, it was great reading :D

hahah i love lilly's pov! it's so funny, keeps sending me into hysterics when i read the convosations between her and jude! oh and also wanting to know why they hate each other so much.

anyways, another great chapter!

this is seriously one of the best first chapters i've read! great idea too and i love your writing style! anywho, loving this story so far :)

I found this chapter particularly entertaining. I'm not sure if you meant it like that, but you should take it as a compliment. I particularly liked the part where every ten or twenty minutes Lilly had to remove some part of Jude's body from hers. And, of course, when she pulled him off the bed completely. You should continue, and bear in mind the fact that you have at least one reviewing reader. :-)

Mil

This is a good first chapter. It has humour, as well as a varied vocabulary. And, of course, plenty of ways to expand into a story.

Mil