Reviews for my love you gave
Rolande Hesse chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
You have such a way with words... Beautiful and lovely! Makes you sigh a little at the end. In a good way. ;)
Time To Change chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Feels gentle and beautiful.

In the last line you put "you have me the day and i gave you the night" - did you mean gave both times?
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
great piece, I really enjoyed it.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
I like the contrast of the ending, and just the entire way the poem is played and layed out. I don't even know, there is just something that pleases me about this. Good job.