Reviews for Wings & Roses
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
if I think about you... comma after you

there's not day I stop wondering... capitalize the T

don't wait for me if you're...capital D

or you'll get drowned.. or you'll drown

you can win but to lose too... comma before but

the answer close and unattainable.. capitalize the T

don't stop flying... never.. ever otherwise it's a double negative, which means stop flying

I like this piece a lot... the Icarus reference was nice and the twist, which the water was really nice. I also love all the questions you ask. It was really awesome. NIce job!
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Love this poem to! Nice job! Keep up the great work!

XKristie MarieX
Walrus Lover 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
I can't fly, otherwise I'd take your advice.

-Wally