|Reviews for Wings & Roses|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
if I think about you... comma after you
there's not day I stop wondering... capitalize the T
don't wait for me if you're...capital D
or you'll get drowned.. or you'll drown
you can win but to lose too... comma before but
the answer close and unattainable.. capitalize the T
don't stop flying... never.. ever otherwise it's a double negative, which means stop flying
I like this piece a lot... the Icarus reference was nice and the twist, which the water was really nice. I also love all the questions you ask. It was really awesome. NIce job!
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Love this poem to! Nice job! Keep up the great work!
| Walrus Lover 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
I can't fly, otherwise I'd take your advice.