Reviews for Help me, please
Apheliac chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
I love the way you repeat the line 'Help me, please' over and over again. This is a good poem, if a little disorientated because of fictionpress's crap formatting ;)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
you said I could call you.. capitalize the Y

I really love the chorus... it was really done. It flowed well and I really like how bittersweet it was
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Very sad! But I really like this. nice job!

XKristie MarieX