Reviews for Sinking
Goldenstars chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
its very hard to portray apathy without using to much emotion. But i think you did it rather well. The character feels apathetic but we feel empathic. its very good.
Sayacinari chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
very descriptive, and to the point.
centenarian chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
It's so freaking sad. It portrays, quite clearly and vividly, the emotions, or rather the lack of emotions, the numb feeling that just takes over. And I know the part where everything's just moving too fast. It's sad, but true that you don't even care at all. Good job on this one.
HollowxPromises chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
I'm taking this...litrally and how you feel when your heart breaks.

And if that's what you're going for...it's discribed perfectly.
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Such pretty, powerful words. I love how you left it open-ended and prone to interpretation.

Good job.