Reviews for What You Need
prerona chapter 48 . 11/16/2017
One of the most beautiful epilogues I've ever read...I don't know what it is but u touched my heart...:-)
It was so amazing that I reviewed something on fictionpress for the first more fan added to ur list.
guest chapter 48 . 3/16/2015
Wonderfully written.
But frankly saying, Beth did NOT deserve a happy ending and a man like Peter after all she had done..
Alixah chapter 49 . 9/23/2014
i loved this story!
thank you for this :)
AKhwab chapter 49 . 6/3/2013
Thanks for the story. I enjoyed it. Kind of. But I felt it was more than a little screwed up. Anyway, your effort was visible. Good luck for your future endeavours.
AKhwab chapter 28 . 6/3/2013
This should have been the time for Michel & Ria to get together, no?
AKhwab chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Seems cliche but I'm interested even tho I know the two besties will end up together after much acting, kissing & crying :-p You had a few mistakes. In one of them, you used 'to' instead of 'two'. There was this other part where I think you forgot to include "me".
ClosetReader chapter 18 . 2/5/2013
Rereading this and I cannot believe Bethany's nerve to say that ari is not as innocent as she seems.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/9/2012
What happend to chapter 16?!
Darling Deer chapter 48 . 8/24/2012
This story may not be as well-written as others but, this has got to be one of my favourite epilogues ever! Especially the last paragraph, well done!
Robin chapter 49 . 8/11/2012
Very dramatic but a well thought out story although it was a bit long and some of the plot did drag on a bit; but overall it was a nice, entertaining read.
OPatron chapter 48 . 8/10/2012
wow! this was super fantastic! i could really relate with the characters and i literally was on an emotional rollercoaster throughout the story. well done!
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 48 . 1/13/2012
this was one of the most intense stories i've ever read, it just blew my mind away. even though the epilogue was written in a completely different style from the rest of the story (you warned us p) i'm glad i read it, cause i'm just too curious not to p

i never thought the problems between beth and ria were that deep and serious, it shocked the h*ll out of me xD i do feel that bethany was the one at fault though. how could she steal her sister's first boyfriend (or any, for that matter?)? i know there are a lot of those things happening, but i just don't GET IT! family has to be more important, i would rather move to the other side of the earth than do anything like that to my sister! i just can't understand her beeing upset with ria, she stole HER boyfriend, slept with him and wasn't even sorry about it. i don't care about the guy, he was just a GUY and a junkie at that! how could she turn against her own sister for that? if my sister had done that to me i would never have spoken to her again, or my parents if they accepted it. i just feel so angry with beth for being so f*cking messed up! sounds stupid, i know p i have a vivid imagination and i got really into this one, especially with this topic, which i feel very strongly about...

i'm glad they both finally found themselves in healthy, loving relationships, although to be honest, right now i kind of wish beth had ended up dead in a ditch somewhere, i'm childish and unforgiving p

i loved michel and how he and ria interacted, it was just so real. i must admit, when reading romance stories and there is a sex scene, it usually doesn't feel very "real" to me, it's like whoever wrote it reads a bit too much harlequins or something, but when ria and michel made out i found it very realistic p

i'm glad i'm not related to ria, i would have gone ape-shit on all the homophobes :( my favorite of the twins was george, though. he was just the voice of reason ria needed, and he really cared for her sensibly or what it was he said.

i really liked the fact that she talked it out with veronica, i know that it was a terrible thing to do, to break it on her like that, but had it been me, i would have done it so much worse. ria is way more responsible then me. i did not like the fact that veronica took callum back, i would have thrown him out and gotten shared custody. i have never been in love, so maybe i'm not a good judge, but i don't think my pride would have ever allowed me to take a cheater back, especially not one as weak as callum. i don't think it makes the children happy to have to watch their father disrespect the mother so badly.

i loved the funny parts of the story, they were hilarious!

ok, now that i've ranted enough; thank you for a really engaging story! i read it all in one go and the time is currently 04:10. i'm not even tired, 'cause i was so into it
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 27 . 1/13/2012
oh god! and i thought the scene in the car was funny, this had me laughing till my stomach hurt and i had tears in my eyes! first in the shop and then the hand-cuffs falling out like that, this is killing me X'D
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 26 . 1/13/2012
"Woah. Did I just say love? Shit. And then, and then, Michel leant forward again and flicked on the radio. And guess what song came up? I was made for loving you baby." that had me laughing so hard xDthe whole situation was hilarious! so typical that a song on the radio makes the car ride awkward xD
Kaeru Love chapter 48 . 6/22/2011
Wow. I read the entire story in one sitting. It was that riveting. There was a lot of family angst, which I'm not normally much a fan of, but you channeled all of that into this great story of love and forgiveness, without being cheesy or fake, and just... ugh! I hope you know what I mean. It was really great. Even the epilogue-which I was skeptical about at first because of the omniscient POV-was really poetic and quite... beautiful. Yeah, you wrote this story a long time ago... But I just wanted to let you know that someone out there still appreciates it. I hope you're still writing, because you sure are talented :)
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