Reviews for relativity
hanfiddle chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Very, very nice, and very Japanese
Written chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
simple and different; I really like it.
gg. lass chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
i've never been one for haikus...probably cause most people haven't been able to master them...

but this is wonderful.

i smiled when i read it.

i love it.

great job.

yours until the wind changes,

gg
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Very unusual and thought provoking. I like how this examines itself, and then is a personal socialization at the end. Excellent haiku. MD:77.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Very pretty image and quite funny. I love the last line because I could imagine someone saying that line. Great job.

-C.N
Ryan Schiff chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Its dew in the morning, am I right?

I love it.