|Reviews for empty hues|
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I really like the last three lines. Interesting poem, the feeling really comes across.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
the second sentence really got me, but then i guess all of it did, really.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
What a contrast from the norm. I really loved this. I could just so relate, like there is no possibility of reaching the person you could be, you want to be. The delicious thoughts of being eccentric and everything that isn't what you are, of who you really should be. Beautiful. Great job.