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![]() ![]() ![]() Really pretty poem! I liked the first stanza the best, because I like the image in it; I also loved 'and the blue sky can be / home for when you are homeless'. Your writing is realistic and filled with hope at the same time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the second stanza. it's short, but i know the feeling, even though i'm not sure i feel it all the time. lovely. (just a side note: i think "knifes" should be "knives"). |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. great. I like the taking two steps at a time. Implies so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was actually quite beautiful. I adored the second stanza. The whole thing was really good though, great job. |