Reviews for the world
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Really pretty poem! I liked the first stanza the best, because I like the image in it; I also loved 'and the blue sky can be / home for when you are homeless'. Your writing is realistic and filled with hope at the same time.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
i love the second stanza. it's short, but i know the feeling, even though i'm not sure i feel it all the time.

lovely. (just a side note: i think "knifes" should be "knives").
Zonne chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
wow. great. I like the taking two steps at a time. Implies so much.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
That was actually quite beautiful. I adored the second stanza. The whole thing was really good though, great job.