Reviews for Natalia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() it was really good. please, write a sequel,, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect. Onto part two. |
![]() ![]() I really wish this was continued into a full ones I really get attached to usually become unfinished. I could come see myself foregoing food and staying up super late just to see your updates! Just plz think about starting a fic? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() SEQUEL TO YOUR SEQUEL! I DEMAND IT!LOL...PLEASSSSSEEEEE! I LOVE THIS ITS SOOOO HOT AND FRESH! |
![]() ![]() DAMN!That was some of the best ''me'' time i've had in a long time. you are really talented. it had a nice backstory and had personalities and characters, something rare in a one shot. BRAVO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple and nice. You make a series out of this. It's good. hehehe... Hope to read more of your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, but I thought the writing felt a little awkward and overwrought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahah! fun light hearted story i liked it XD one thing i think u typed "quite" instead of "quiet" may've just been my eyes playing trick on me :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() All i Can Say Iss WOW Just WOW loll good job on the storyy you should continue it seems steamyy loll |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA! Yes, I loved it. Mark is great, I love the wealthy arogance "And I would have found you". Really good ending too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! he he he ! i wish i could meet a mark ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA! I loved it. This was a ton of fun. Can't wait to see if more like it come out. |