Reviews for Natalia
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
nice one shot.
FM Radio chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Holy shamoley. That made me hot, and that is no small feat. WOW! You have talent, I really believed your characters, and their personalities, unlike a lot of the "just sex for sex" stories, this had plot and sex and didn't go into too much detail. In other words, it was amazing.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
really good job. it would be interesting to see how their relationship turned out in the long run
Ninavs chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
OMG!Loved it! You have a sequel right? You must have one!lol

Off to find it!
broken-and-bruised chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
omg i loved it! you should continue it into a story!
dragonchaser65 chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
absolutely loved it! would have liked to see it continued to see where it goes though
kimmy chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
loved it!
unpredicable17 chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Loved it! Great job!
Eboni chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
You should definitly keep writting this story. I want to see where it goes.
Itsa Mia chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
you shoulld have kept going. that was a cute story...
Float a Boat chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
I absolutely loved this story. Natalia and Mark have great chemistry. I would love to read more about them. Definitely going on my favorites.
LostinLov3 chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
too hot! what a shock, but obviously its a good thing for now...

he sure likes to be in control
BettyBoo chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Aw, are you going to leave it there? ;) Like - no, scratch that! Loved it! lol!
NoieD chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Cute and sexy, but I think it needs a follow up! Does it work or not! Great job; I'm enjoying your one-shots!
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