Reviews for To Love
Phaedre Gage chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
I really liked this poem. :) The wording was excellent and I liked the lineation as well. It really makes you think. The ending was one of the best parts, as it ends on quite a finalising but effective note.
hunnybee4 chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
twists around a bit but i like it. nice job.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
I was begining to wonder what happened to you. Haven't seen some of your work in awile. But This is really good. Nice job.

XKristie MarieX
In the Rye chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
some of the language seemed unnecessary. too many "to" this and that. it just made the whole thing seem like it went overboard.