gahhhh this was sooo sad... i had a feeling her guardian angel was Jonathan hehehehe

its so obviously jonathan agh i felt so bad for him:(

This broke my heart...I'm so sad... I don't know what else to say... BRAVO !

Ugh Emma please. I CAN'T.

That ending killed me. IT'S ALWAYS THE GOOD ONES

I wanted to cry so bad after I finished this may because I was too sure that Emma and Jonnie wld be happy in the end. I even had a feeling my heart was being strangled or something. I feel bad for the 3 of them. Jonnie knew he wld get no chance with Emma after the reply to his last text. Emma can't ever bear the feeling of guilt of never realising what was in front of her. And Tyler knows he was partly the reason why Jonnie never got the one he liked.
And I feel really bad for myself because I'm still sad.
An adjective like "touching" would literally be an understatement.

Bittersweet ... I love it :)

I. Hate. Emma.

All along.. how couldn't she have known.. I even knew.. why didn't she give up on Tyler.. I would have.. now he's a vegetable.. gone forever.. geez, I'm a wreck because of this story. It's just.. I can't even comprehend what I'm trying to say..

I'm crying currently. God Jonnie, why.. when I read, "he is such a goofball" I thought, "I like goofballs. Then again, he loves Emma so yeah.."

Amazing job with this story : ) I loved it

OMG the end of this made me want to cry so BAD! girr but it was AMAZING!

NOOO! Why must the ending be so tragic? :( Not that I didn't like it, I did, I absolutely did! It's just that the ending kind of kills me, because wonderful Jonathon is in a coma! And, well, Emma's kind of blind insistence that Tyler liked her kind of bugged me, especially because it hurt Jonnie...but, well, the ending was kind of beautiful, in a tragic way. Kind of like Romeo and Juliet.
If only they could have had a happy ending...:(

I cried in this one-shot.. No not a full on ourburst, but just a single tear.. I always had a feeling that it was Jonathan who was sending those messages.. Emma was just too oblivious and caught up with her infatuation with Tyler to see-and I mean really see-Jonathan for who he is and the fact that he has always been there for her, loving her, caring for her.. And just as a side note, I really love that song too :)

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD I AM BAWLING

That made me cry :'(. I love how you write your stories, its truly amazing.

Ah-mazing! The one criticism I have is that I got confused a little on the text message parts. But I still love this story.

AHH! i almost cried! I loved it but it was so sad at the ending!

that was heartbreaking :(