|Reviews for word play|
| gg. lass chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
i liked this.
it has a nice rhythm.
yours until the wind changes,
| emmaliefje chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Hehe I like this one. I love the last three lines : "Somehow old words / sound new / when they come from you." I'm making that my msn name now :P I like it alot
| dawnimoya chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
haha, i actually find myself bopping my head from side to side as i read this. really cute. :D nice job here.
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
These poems all sound to me like short little tongue twisters - bouncy and cute. In the first one, I think you should switch the first line and the second; that way crisscross and repetitious sort of rhyme.
| W. Griffin chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
i love the rythmic play, it is really cool!
| rodgrod med flode chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Interesting. Can't say I've read anything quite like this before. It was cute, and for some reason, when I was reading it in my head, certain parts seemed to almost have a rap-ish kind of rhythm. Like, the good, intelligent kind of rap that's pretty hard to come across anymore.
But maybe that's just me.