Reviews for One Warning
emmaliefje chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
aaw wow I like this one the most! I really really really do! It's so beautiful... not quite sad, but calm, and... pretty... *floats off*

I'm hypnotized (by your talent :P)
emptyemptyemptyempty chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
The words aren't particularly special, but something about your placing and rythm is very readable and emotional. I very much like it.

Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Love the flow.

For some reason I was reminded of a type of lullaby, where caring parents warn their children to stay away from danger by telling stories. The poem has the same concerned ring to it, like a parent worried for a child's safety. Although I guess it doesn't necessarily have to be a child/parent deal; you get the idea.

All in all, very sweet. (:
W. Griffin chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
that is a wonderful poem! the mythological references make the poem whaat it is - amazing!

-w. griffin
chuppie chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
a good poem. you do a good job keeping to the mythology, but you also take the myth and create something more. I loved it. Please keep up the good work.