| Reviews for Punishment |
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   ramblingrobin chapter 1 . 9/17/2017 Wow. Amazing first chapter. Very powerful. Excellent job. Xoxo Robin |
| spcecse7 chapter 23 . 8/4/2013 Call me gushy or whatnot but I don't like your ending to the story : ( but you do have a wonderful talent for writing |
| MoonBeauty chapter 11 . 3/16/2011 Sorry I didn't review 8... I forgot... :) I like this story. Btw the story with "Jamie" in it is up now so that comment I made isn't right anymore. |
| MoonBeauty chapter 10 . 3/16/2011 Jamie, haha... That's my characters name. (the story isn't up yet though) :) Oh... Things are looking good. I'm so happy~ |
| MoonBeauty chapter 9 . 3/16/2011 Yay. He was saved. I'm pretty sure he would have died there if left any longer. Dehydration and starvation and his wounds would have killed him! What does Kaelan mean "the evil that was my dad"? Can't be as bad as Brian. |
| MoonBeauty chapter 7 . 3/16/2011 Oh my god... Kaelan seriously didn't do anything. If I saw this happen to my friend I would make sure that he DIDN'T go with that guy. Such creepiness... I'm scared to read the next chapter. |
| MoonBeauty chapter 6 . 3/15/2011 *sniff*... He better tell him what's going on. Don't do that annoying drama move of keeping the secret in order to not make the other person worry. KEEPING SECRETS DOES NOT HELP. (sorry, I'm really sane, I swear.) |
| MoonBeauty chapter 5 . 3/15/2011 : ( Aw man... Finally my suggestion was met, but his "dad" will freak when he finds out he's been to the doctor... UGH. LIFE SUCKS...! I really don't think he should have been in the care of that guy when his mom died. If they have family members, that would be better... |
| MoonBeauty chapter 4 . 3/15/2011 AH! Don't be alarmed. I don't really scream, I do it in my head. :( This is making me sad when will it END? He really doesn't need additional beatings from bullies. |
| MoonBeauty chapter 3 . 3/15/2011 Nice first part of the chapter... BUT THE ENDING? GAH! D: Oh my goodness. Give him time to heal, dirt bag! Ugh... I don't think foster care is worse than living there. |
| MoonBeauty chapter 2 . 3/15/2011 Once again. See a doctor... Haha. I better give up, huh? :) At least he has a friend now. Hopefully Kyle's life will get better from here. Ugh. It bothers me he is treated like crap at home... Then he comes to school to be treated like crap and neglected. Nobody should endure so much pain. By the way, written very well. Good words. Did you use a thesaurus? (I do sometimes...) |
| MoonBeauty chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 Wow. This scared me... but it was extremely well written. The only thing I can say about this kid is that he needs to see a doctor. No, I mean because of the rape. He must have been torn inside and that's why he bled. Being a medical major, it freaked me out... Hahaha. I shall keep reading! |
| TagYou'reIt chapter 3 . 1/25/2011 "You've wounded me deeply. I am not a gay sexual deviant trying to seduce you into his bed! I am a bi-sexual deviant, imagining you in my bed! Gosh, get it right!" Kaelan cried indignantly. That's adorable! I'm caught between going Aww! (cute) and Aww... (poor Kyle). *reads on* |
| Oritreesan chapter 11 . 1/17/2011 Thanks for the death note spoiler :( I'm only on episode 23 :P but the story has kept me captive this far. I'm sure I'll engjoy the rest of it! |
| Anonymous chapter 2 . 8/6/2010 Yay! I love your story! It's really good, especially the details. Kaelan sounds realy cool. XP kudos on your awesome work! |