Reviews for Pressure of Adulthood
Open your eyes Chopstick chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
i likedd it. the first line was xreative. i would have just said "breath" or the likes instead of gills. i actually counted out the syllubulls for this. and it worked! haha. good job. soorry if my spelling sucks right now. I'm holding a baby and typing with one hand. :)
Master Gray Wolf chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
You're telling me (x . x)
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Yep, that's all true - I agree with you. When you reach adulthood then things get slightly complicated and then you're starting to be more pressured in life for whatever reason.
Spirit Tigress chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Ain't it the truth!
Mad Asher chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Very interesting. I like how you compare us to humans as they dive into water, they start losing breath or something like that. The more deeper you swim, the more your lungs call for air. I like.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Good haiku. :) Write on!

Anna _