Reviews for of the days before
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Love the ending. Beautiful piece, like the imagery. Good work :)
Sobriquet Queen chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Beautiful, as ever.

I'll settle for 'superlative' this time.
String chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Gr...I dont like my mom's bf's laptop...Anyway, beautiful work as always, Wolf.I read this at a moument in a beautiful day when the skyes went darker and the light turned cold...Chilling , again, a wonderful work...Argh, getting at a boarding school of sorts with one of Mom's bf's daughters, and she's cooking a fiesta(yes, their mexican) for about 20 korean students...in a christan school...No, the irony dose not escape me.I've been laughing about it since last , Im probibly boring that wind's cold...So long untill next time.

-String
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
This is pretty good. Well done! Keep writing.

Anna _
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Interesting poem-story!

I like how you choose to address a jester; usually a king's fool is the last one you would ask for help. It interested me that the narrator would ask him for courage.

Nice ending lines, too.