Reviews for Markus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO, NOT THE END! Please continue this story, it's FANTASTIC! I love the characters, and I want to see how everyone reacts to them being together and if what they're experiencing right now is just a passing feeling or the real deal. Please, please please keep going. I'll love you forever! |
![]() ![]() great. really great. the intimate scenes are realistic. only criticism: i don't see any examples of natalia actually be controlling. just her thinking about it before the email, and showing her trueself when she walked up to markus in the bar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW COME ON MAKE IT LONGER JUST WEN IT WUSS GETTING INTERESTING MAN I HATE U WIT A PASSION RIGHT NAW YOU LET ME DOWN MAN |
![]() ![]() ![]() o ho ho ho kinky ! i hope this in not the end ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please keep going...it's been almost a year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you gonna end it here? seems incomplete. ;] |
![]() ![]() not gonna lie i really loved these shots. i think you should turn it into a full on story, but that might be because i have a thing for doomed relatiinships trying to make it work. the charactors are brilliant and my fave is the best friend. anyway just sharing the praise this wasnt really any help to you as a writer except as an ego boost. well watever i still love it. |
![]() ![]() i've really enjoyed the 2 one-shots. i hope you turn it into a full out story though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This couple is hott! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this couple! They're so cute together not just when they're in bed, but as a couple in general. I think it's hilarious that you have this woman who many claimed was too aggressive and then a real man like markus comes alongand nowshe's this meek little submissive thing and it's not bad. I like the fact that he's in control, he's not hurting her and if you look at it she's actually kindain charge because he's set on pleasing her! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this and the first part from natalia's point of view. if you get anymore ideas, you should definitely think of adding a little more. i love your writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore this and the first part. The thing I love most is how realistic and complex your characters are. I love Natalia and Mark together, not just during their intimate moments, but when their just talking or looking at each other. There is so much you could do with this story, and I wished I could convince you to continue this, maybe write a short novel... I keep wondering what would happen if her friend found out, or the company, how Mark really feels (After reading this, I'm beginning to feel that he wants a little more than just sex), and Natalia, how she deals with working with him.. AUGH! Please write more! |