I think you should continue and make it an entire story... or continue Natalia. Either way I like it and I think it would be a great story to continue.

oh no not the end! This is charming. It's cute and sweet without being sickening or sending anyone into sugar shock. Sexy but not gratuitously. The sex was dealt with very well, which is rare for fictionpress writers. There is something about the tone if this that I love, not sure how to describe it, down to earth with a little sarcasm? Very nice. I very much hope you continue but if not it was I have enjoyed reading.

They're just lovely and fuckin' hot. I think you should write more about them and their naughty adventures. It's nice because you've a plot too and it can be nice to read how they'll deal with their relationship and their differences! I really hope you'll write more.

I liked reading from Mark's POV. I don't know in the first story he didn't seem as controlling. I don't mind a little dominance, but him ordering her around for everything was a bit much to me. I do like his persistence, but would it be too hard to ask her out to dinner. I enjoy the relationship between them, but I think the whole dominance thing should work both ways.

Amazing story! Great POV for Markus. I just love your writing and hope to read more from you very soon. :D

I'm really not into that whole dominance thing, but it's nice to read about their relationship from Markus' point of view. I'd like to see where this goes at work, too! Thanks for the new stories.