Reviews for Forest Fae
Raindare chapter 2 . 10/22/2003
All I can say is, aw... This is such a pleasant little story. The fantasy cynic in me says that the fae may well be more like the Erlkoenig than actually benevolent, but it's good either way. Don't take it down!
Firebird chapter 2 . 1/23/2002
You're a very good writer! You have a knack for description...especially character description (something I lack and admire greatly in others). Ok well on with my ramblings..

Chapter One: Raven sounds very interesting...just her physical description is intriguing. I feel so bad that she's been so abused so much. I wonder why she never ran away...then again where could she go? I'm assuming she has no family or at least none that loves her. However, it's a good thing that she fleed being beaten again or she never would have met Thistle Oakleigh! Oh I loved the line where you say that raven had "plastered herself against the solid trunk of the tree". It was a pretty funny image...I mean being so petrified of a little dwarf/sprite :)

Chapter Two:Oh a blacksmith...that's gotta be fun. I wanted to take metalsmithing this year but it didn't fit in my schedule...ok, the point being that I like anyone who works with metals. It kind of fascinates me. I do have one question...why does he call her "little one"? I mean isn't he technically much smaller then her? It just seems rather funny but then again I'm guessing he was using it because of her age rather then her height. Anyhoo, you left the chapter will a cliffhanger? Ahhhh! I mean I don't know who she's gonna end up with! For that matter I'm not even sure why she's being treated so nicely all of a sudden...write more soon please!
Snowshoe Hare chapter 2 . 12/14/2001
You seem to start your fictional stories somewhat abruptly... Otherwise, very nice, and I will join the masses in requesting that this tale not fall by the wayside.
Kathryn Starr chapter 2 . 11/20/2001
I really like this. It's written very well an theplot seems to be going in a good direction. Please continue when next you get the chance. I know how it is when you're pressed for time. Good luck. ~Kat
Angel chapter 1 . 8/25/2001
Hey sis, this is very good. Usually when i read a story i can get a mental picture of what the characters look like, and yet the tree-gnome eludes my mind's eye. He actually seemed like a fae being since i could get no clear picture of him, he seemed to be ever changing, good work.
ArwenStar914 chapter 2 . 7/18/2001
YAY! Wonderful, of course. I know I sort-of already reviewed this, but I wanted to again. It is so good! Your descriptions are amazing! It makes one feel as if they were really there, seeing everything and experiencing everything. Can't wait for the next chapter! **ArwenStar**
ArwenAria18 chapter 2 . 7/17/2001
ArwenStar says, "Me like, me like..." and I say, Amen! :) I thought you'd never update this story, but this next chapter has been quite satisfying, and may keep me content until that time in the future when you post the next one (hint hint). I think really the best thing about your writings is the way you describe the settings and people and characters... you say you have trouble with conversation and such, but by describing their feelings it makes it very realistic and takes the place of any talking (in the long run **grins**). Okay, have to go read the other updates you made, so farewell... -ArwenAria18
Meirou chapter 2 . 7/17/2001
I adore this fic already! The feel is so medieval and I love the mythical characters you've established! Raven is so loveable and sweet, that you can immediately feel from your description. I can say that if I was to meet Thistle the way that you described him, I would have been much at home as well. Excellent job so far! I really love these fantasy stories and this is no exception! Please continue _
ArwenStar914 chapter 1 . 6/3/2001
Me likes, me likes. Don't worry, I won't hurt you for not working on the Cinderella one. I kinda like this one. And you're right, Raven IS weird! hehe
sos chapter 1 . 6/3/2001
cool. this is BRILLIANT! (me like muse, she cool) wow.. work on this. wow.. sos
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
This was very beautiful. Is there more coming?
ArwenAria18 chapter 1 . 4/18/2001
Will you continue it? Will you, will you? I hope so! As always, your talent holds me in awe... are you sure you don't get sick of me constantly saying the same thing in my reviews? "I loved it, please write more", etc.? Anyway... It was excellent! I loved it!(Please write more) )
faeriegurl too lay 2 sign in chapter 1 . 4/11/2001
very good so far. continue it, i want to see what happens