i read it twice &

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I really, really like the first one. 'busy wishing on themselves' is my favorite line. Very abstract and inspired. Sounds like something from a trippy Beatles song.

The second one is really interesting. A concept I've never read before. Love the metaphor.

I don't see how the two stanzas go together in the third one, but I quite like the second stanza. 'Windows in my eyes' is an interesting idea. Block out what you don't want to see.

i absolutely adore this. ]

Brilliant, loved how it was split into three parts! Nice work, fa line was, "Redemption has put a keep-out sign

on her front door" Keep it up!