Reviews for Lets wish on stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i read it twice & - favourites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really like the first one. 'busy wishing on themselves' is my favorite line. Very abstract and inspired. Sounds like something from a trippy Beatles song. The second one is really interesting. A concept I've never read before. Love the metaphor. I don't see how the two stanzas go together in the third one, but I quite like the second stanza. 'Windows in my eyes' is an interesting idea. Block out what you don't want to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i absolutely adore this. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant, loved how it was split into three parts! Nice work, fa line was, "Redemption has put a keep-out sign on her front door" Keep it up! |