Reviews for Sleepover
allancaldera chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Awwww it was really cute. Matthew's lie was cute also. I like it all.
YuriCore chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
This is so cute!
ALittleLunatic chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
This is really good! You should make a second chap the morning after.
NakedKing chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
aw thats so cute and awkward... jeez... I've been in this very situation. mhmm turned out for the better for me too.
Ocean Owl chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
that was sweet. I liked the overall tension of the story and how it builds up to the kiss. The dialogue was well done too. nice work there! :)
Bexy31 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
It's not unattractive! It's really good! _ So cute! Bless them, he he. It'd be really cool if there were a sequel to this or something - I want to know if they kiss again! _ Or do more than kiss, ha ha. I really liked it! :D
my world of indulgence chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
dont feel like signing in so i jut put my penname in the anonymous spot lol. i thought this was really cute and like...awesome. :) teehee one of the best simple ones ive read in a while. i was satisfied with just a kiss and thats pretty rare. lol
big.break.and.laryngitis chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
dunno. i thought it was pretty attractive, lol.

it's very cute. i like it :)
kioreo chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
zomg so cute! Write more please!
under the bed chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Aww he's so cute and self-conscious. _
deadaccount38289 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Awh! I thought this was great. And so cute! I love it. I think you could definitely make this into a longer story if you wanted to.
gummybaby chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I think it's adorable. very cute, so there. I veto your opinion.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I thought it was excellent! It's very descriptive. you could develop this and put it into a yaio story.
Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I don't see what's so unattractive about it. I think it's very cute. Similar to when a boy and a girl first kiss except this is with two boys.

And for some reason Mathew came off kind of creepy to me. Maybe it was the way he kept approaching Dylan and how he lied about never having a first kiss and practically seducing him. But that's just me.