Awwww it was really cute. Matthew's lie was cute also. I like it all.

This is so cute!

This is really good! You should make a second chap the morning after.

aw thats so cute and awkward... jeez... I've been in this very situation. mhmm turned out for the better for me too.

that was sweet. I liked the overall tension of the story and how it builds up to the kiss. The dialogue was well done too. nice work there! :)

It's not unattractive! It's really good! _ So cute! Bless them, he he. It'd be really cool if there were a sequel to this or something - I want to know if they kiss again! _ Or do more than kiss, ha ha. I really liked it! :D

dont feel like signing in so i jut put my penname in the anonymous spot lol. i thought this was really cute and like...awesome. :) teehee one of the best simple ones ive read in a while. i was satisfied with just a kiss and thats pretty rare. lol

dunno. i thought it was pretty attractive, lol.

it's very cute. i like it :)

zomg so cute! Write more please!

Aww he's so cute and self-conscious. _

Awh! I thought this was great. And so cute! I love it. I think you could definitely make this into a longer story if you wanted to.

I think it's adorable. very cute, so there. I veto your opinion.

I thought it was excellent! It's very descriptive. you could develop this and put it into a yaio story.

I don't see what's so unattractive about it. I think it's very cute. Similar to when a boy and a girl first kiss except this is with two boys.

And for some reason Mathew came off kind of creepy to me. Maybe it was the way he kept approaching Dylan and how he lied about never having a first kiss and practically seducing him. But that's just me.