i'd love to see how it'll turn out! i hope it will be as good as your story is...which will be hard.

Okay, so I really enjoyed this story. I wish you'd choosen to make it a whole story with chapters (and all that jazz). The emotions and feelings in this one piece was amazing. You're a good writer, keep it up!

One thing: the beginning is okay, but it didn't really catch me (it was something that a lot of people start their stories with). I'm just glad that I kept reading inspite of the introduction.

omg...so sad! this poor woman! *sigh* so sad...love it!