|Reviews for Center of the Universe|
| it's june chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
It's always nice to put things in perspective. -
No matter where you are in the universe, life goes on beyond your control. Now that's a message we don't see very often on Fictionpress.
Some con-crit: Some of the thoughts seem really disjointed because you've separated them into lines; I think lines 4 and 5 in particular should be one single (albeit long) line.
Good job anyways.
| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I like this point of view.
Here, being the center of the universe doesn't sound so great; more like an unwanted load to carry. I like the simplicity of this; the way the narrator seems resigned to his/her fate and it is simply stating the facts.
| Jellyfish Or Something chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I love this new take on the center of the universe thing. It's a break from the center of the universe person being referred to as a snob.