Reviews for I was there
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
he miss you so, girl... misses

his warm is taken away 'cause of you... warmth

I like this... and I like all of the repetition except my and is cold because the other parts had a litter variation, but that part didn't. I really like the ending.. it's very well done. I also like all the smilies. The only thing is the punctuation and capitalization was on again, off again. Other than that... great piece
Qzie chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Oh... that just about broke my heart. The repetition worked well in the verses and I like how it kind of went full circle. Pardon me if I'm wrong, but it sort of sounds like a letter to two people. I dunno. It's very touching and really tugs at your heartstrings. Excellent song. -Qzie