Reviews for God's Umbrella
Fractured Illusion chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
"existence of god"

- Since you seem to talk of one god, then I think you spell it God. I dont know for sure though

"and their was nothing more"

- there

"His finally resting place"

- final

"but it’s origins were a mystery."

- its

"The umbrella had appeared out of nowhere into nowhere."

- Hah I like this line. Interesting way to see it :)

Although this comes off more as humor, it's still a nice piece. I think we've all caught a lucky break like that so we can relate :)

- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link on my profile).
stardustfaery chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
:)wow. That was an adorable story. Amazing what an umbrella can do? I thought you captured a fuzzy warm feeling very well.
Mom chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Very funny ending. (You hurt my sore laughing muscles!) I really like this one, though you need to proofread it again. Lots of typos sweety.