|Reviews for cottontail cutlet|
| scarlet stars chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Rather...gross. The beginning is so light and happy, but then the end is very morbid. The line "before he knew it" was out of place also. We as readers don't know who he is. Is it the rabbit, the truck driver, or a new character? I don't know, but it was a nice poem, the rhyming (sp?) is great! :)
| Zonne chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
very rhyme-y for something so gruesome.
Not the easiest to do.
One thing though - not a criticism - a thought - it'd have to be a pet bunny if it was white - or somewhere arctic