Reviews for i cry oceans
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
konban wa

"i feel so much like a kid, now, that i / don't even wipe my nose when it runs."

Heartbreaking. That line and the line, "saltwater taffee / which i never liked as a kid but..." really brought the poem home, made me feel the real power of the piece. Truly amazing. Kudos.

Ha det

Miss Ash Dawn is MAD chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
"saltwater taffee/ which i never liked as a kid but/ lately, i've been wanting those/ years back something fierce."

kelsi bones chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
amazingly visual, as always. i'm sorry there's something thats making you cry oceans, dearest [


ps: i haven't read your PM yet, but i'll guess it's asking for more files. i'll upload some more when i finish reading your new posts _
siphoned afterglow chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
you have no idea how relatable this is for me. and in this piece, you've sumed up my emotions that i've been going through these past couple of days