|Reviews for struggling|
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
I like how you described it. Great job, and keep writing!
| ibmc2146 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
This was insanely beautiful. Excellent job; I can't think of anything that's wrong with it. I wish more writers on FP had even half of the talent you seem to have.
| lost for words chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
"Death mocks and comes
to visit sometimes
with his creative suicidal thoughts
and even though i hang out with him
for a while
i have the sense to walk away"
I love that, i know the feeling it gives. The ending is perfect.