Reviews for struggling
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
I like how you described it. Great job, and keep writing!
ibmc2146 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
This was insanely beautiful. Excellent job; I can't think of anything that's wrong with it. I wish more writers on FP had even half of the talent you seem to have.
lost for words chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
"Death mocks and comes

to visit sometimes

with his creative suicidal thoughts

and even though i hang out with him

for a while

i have the sense to walk away"

I love that, i know the feeling it gives. The ending is perfect.