Reviews for Symmetry |
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![]() ![]() Cool story! Loved it! :] |
![]() ![]() it was a great story i love it congradualtion |
![]() ![]() ![]() A! I absolutely love this story! Well-written, great characters, and the pace was slow enough for the two lovebirds to progress accordingly. Cocaine? Quite the narcotic! I'm sorry, I absolutely LOVE this story!:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea in ur story. I think one thing u need to work on is writing style. Ur a bit too blunt when it comes to the more serious issues and the characters’ dilemma. Completely understandable. Keep working at it, yeah, n maybe one day you can publish books with real issues :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You Can Definitely Tell A Story Well. I Didn't Want It To End. It's Like 9 Chapters Were A Tease. Excellent Character Development And I Liked The Smooth Rhythm Of The Piece. It Flowed With An Ease And A Fluidity That I Loved; Very Calm, Relatable, Realism. CONSIDER A SEQUEL ! :) I Think There Is So Much More Of Edison And Noelle To Experience. Thank You For The Perfect End To My Day :) ( I will definitely re read) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are There Really Girls Like Tiffany? Man! Too Bad. Good For Edison. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Knew You Wouldn't Let Me Down! Leave The Tender Moment Alone. Episode Nicely Done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dual Inner Struggle. Very Real. Did I Say I Was Really Caring About These Two? I Am. Will They Be Able To Be Each Others Strength? I Know You Know, But I'm On To Chapter 7 To Watch And See. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOH! Finally The Conflict! And You Didn't Make It A Forced Cliche. It"s Like I'm In The Diner Watching! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There Is A Sweetness That Is Coming Through In A Really Genuine Way. Not "Chicky" But COMPLETELY BELIEVABLE. Can't Write More, RUNNING To Chapter 5! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh My God! What's Going To Happen Now? This Is Getting So Good! Gotta Go Chapter 4's Waiting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again...WOW! I Have To Say This Is Such A Great Time! I'm Aggressively Compelled Forward! taking my laptop with me to garage for my smoke... see you in Chapter 3... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I Just Say... WOW! I Can't Wait for Chapter 2! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet. Cute. Edison is messed up, and Noelle is very innocent and trying to be tough, and they are perfectly imperfect for each other. I love it. They would be one of those couple who last. |
![]() ![]() ![]() no tatoos? how boring. I wonder what Edison's friends problem was. |