Cool story! Loved it! :]

it was a great story i love it congradualtion

A! I absolutely love this story! Well-written, great characters, and the pace was slow enough for the two lovebirds to progress accordingly. Cocaine? Quite the narcotic! I'm sorry, I absolutely LOVE this story!:D

I like the idea in ur story. I think one thing u need to work on is writing style. Ur a bit too blunt when it comes to the more serious issues and the characters’ dilemma. Completely understandable. Keep working at it, yeah, n maybe one day you can publish books with real issues :)

You Can Definitely Tell A Story Well. I Didn't Want It To End. It's Like 9 Chapters Were A Tease.

Excellent Character Development And I Liked The Smooth Rhythm Of The Piece. It Flowed With An Ease And A Fluidity That I Loved; Very Calm, Relatable, Realism.

CONSIDER A SEQUEL ! :) I Think There Is So Much More Of Edison And Noelle To Experience.

Thank You For The Perfect End To My Day :) ( I will definitely re read)

Are There Really Girls Like Tiffany? Man! Too Bad. Good For Edison.

I Knew You Wouldn't Let Me Down! Leave The Tender Moment Alone.

Episode Nicely Done.

Dual Inner Struggle. Very Real. Did I Say I Was Really Caring About These Two? I Am.

Will They Be Able To Be Each Others Strength? I Know You Know, But I'm On To Chapter 7

To Watch And See.

OOH! Finally The Conflict! And You Didn't Make It A Forced Cliche. It"s Like I'm In The Diner Watching!

There Is A Sweetness That Is Coming Through In A Really Genuine Way. Not "Chicky" But

COMPLETELY BELIEVABLE. Can't Write More, RUNNING To Chapter 5!

Oh My God! What's Going To Happen Now? This Is Getting So Good!

Gotta Go Chapter 4's Waiting...

Again...WOW!

I Have To Say This Is Such A Great Time! I'm Aggressively Compelled Forward!

taking my laptop with me to garage for my smoke... see you in Chapter 3...

Can I Just Say... WOW!

I Can't Wait for Chapter 2!

Very sweet. Cute. Edison is messed up, and Noelle is very innocent and trying to be tough, and they are perfectly imperfect for each other. I love it. They would be one of those couple who last.

no tatoos? how boring. I wonder what Edison's friends problem was.