|Reviews for Vampiric Slave|
| AshleyMichele chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
wow , im really loving this story , i cant wait for you to write more.
| wolfen princess chapter 3 . 9/18/2008
It's okay, but there isn't a whole lot of description. It would probably be better if you slowed down and gave more details about both the characters and the setting. The story seems kind of rushed...
| DefineNightmare chapter 3 . 7/27/2008
| o.O.o.Emmett.Is.Mine.o.O.o chapter 2 . 5/21/2008
You've got a pretty good story going, but I think it might be a little bit better if you slowed down and described everything. What they look like, where they are... That kind of thing. Of course, this is just my opinion, so you can ignore me if you like. I'm not trying to be mean, just helpful...
| tobslytobby chapter 2 . 4/19/2008
good story, but i wish the chapters were longer.
| Olivia C chapter 2 . 3/19/2008
I love where this story is going...I wish there were more dialogue b/w Eric and Alicia, and if possible could you make the chapters longer?
| j.c-chic chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
| crazylady4 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
this is good, a little short but good. next chapter please